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Might be used for a contest for
But I don't think its good enough ^^;
~Melissa :butterflytwo:

Suggestions are welcome!

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Let me see....Suggestions:
1) Fix the torso and make her a bit thinner
2) Since the torso is like that it makes her legs look short
3) The arms are too short
4) The lips....mm..There's something about it that makes it not match..Try making lips that aren't so full.I mean Mio is just 16. Her lips wouldn't be exactly like that yet.
5) The hair is not flairy enough.If it is not it will look lik mayu's

I hope that will improve your drawing...But the butterflys are nice though.

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Thank you so much for you suggestions! I be sure to keep them in mind next time. :)

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